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Challenge 5 submission

March 9, 2008 - 4:15pm — Sheena Nand (United Students)
55.04%
bennett's picture

steady improvement

United Students, you are clearly making progress in terms of your technical expertise & presentation skills. This PowerPoint included both text & images, with transition effects. You obviously read the challenge criteria carefully & your submission shows a good effort to respond to the questions in an organized manner. You will no doubt hear it from others that viewing the presentation was somewhat challenging because the text-based slides went by too quickly for us to read everything, while the image-based slides seemed to just sit there for a long time without adding any information. I would have given you an extra 15 points for quality if you had defended your choices better. You added coal to the energy mix for the period from 2015 to 2025: why? And why do your operating costs INCREASE from 2015 to 2025?

Shannon Cummings's picture

Simple, but the core

Simple, but the core elements are there, and your point is clearly made. Like Bennett said, you're making leaps and bounds in tackling all these different presentation mediums thrown at us every week.
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Deb's picture

Issues raised

You raised some interesting issues around IPPs -- I would have liked to see more suggestions on how we fill the energy gap, in a sustainable way, without them. Good effort!

Debbie Hearn's picture

Interesting choices

I thought you made good use of wind energy and run of river, but I was was surprised by your choice of coal, especially in the long term! I wish you had given more reasons and details for the reasoning behind some of your choices. It's also not clear how your came up with your operating cost figures, but they seem too low in some cases. Nice images on the powerpoint slides.

Dare2BDigital-Admin's picture

Imagine this song playing

When watching this presentation, imaging this sound playing in the background: Melissa Etheridge - I need to wakeup

United Students included a clip from this song in their presentation, but unfortunately, PowerPoint did not embed it into their presentation file.
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